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Leverage Fic: Somebody's Crying

TITLE: "Somebody's Crying"
SUMMARY: No one makes Parker cry and lives to tell about it.
RATING: PG-13 (for language)
SPOILERS: None
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Written for comment_fic. The theme was tears and hawk_dancing prompted Leverage, Team or Eliot, no one makes Parker cry and lives to tell about it. Special thanks to steffync81 for the banner!




Somebody's Crying


Eliot spotted his intended target lurking at the back of McRory’s, advanced on him, and slammed him up against the wall.

“Whoa, Eliot, what the fuck?” Hardison’s voice sounded small and choked, on account of the way Eliot’s forearm was pressed against his windpipe, choking him.

“Why’s Parker crying?” Eliot demanded. He was so angry he could feel the veins bulging in his forehead.

Hardison glared at him in a show of patently false bravado. “You wanna maybe take your hand off my throat there, friend.”

Eliot growled low in his throat. “I ain’t playing with you. What’d you do to her?”

“What makes you think I did anything?”

Eliot’s face loomed closer, his lips pulled back in a menacing snarl. “’Cause a minute ago you were all cozied up to her at the bar and now she’s locked in the women’s bathroom bawling her eyes out.”

The kid actually had the nerve to look affronted rather than ashamed. “I gotta say, man, I’m really not seeing how it’s any of your business.”

Eliot leaned on Hardison’s windpipe a little more to drive home the precariousness of his situation. “It’s my business because Parker’s in there crying and I wanna know why.”

“I didn’t do nothing,” Hardison squeaked.

“Wrong answer.” Eliot applied a little more pressure, just to let him know what it felt like, then eased up enough to let him talk again.

Hardison’s eyes widened in fear. “Seriously, man, it’s nothing like what you think.”

“I’m only gonna ask you one more time, Hardison. What did you do?”

“Christ Almighty, Eliot! I told her I loved her, okay?”

Eliot blinked. “You did what?”

“That’s it, I swear! I said ‘I love you’ and then she freaked out and ran for the bathroom.”

Eliot let go abruptly. Hardison collapsed to the floor, clutching at his bruised throat and looking up at him warily.

“That’s it?” Eliot stared at him in abject disbelief. “Do you even understand that’s probably the first time anyone’s ever said those words to Parker and meant it?”

“That’s why I thought she’d like it!”

Like it? This is Parker we’re talking about, you don’t just ... she’s not ... she doesn’t ...” Eliot realized he was stammering and shifted from reasoning back to yelling. “What the hell’s wrong with you?!”

Hardison’s expression tightened momentarily before lapsing into a look of unadulterated misery. “I’m in love, that’s what wrong with me! And the woman of my dreams is apparently crying in the bathroom because I told her how I feel and you’re up in here acting like you’re gonna rip my head off and toss it in a salad and none of this is how I pictured this going.” His shoulders slumped and he pressed his hands against his forehead in a way that even Eliot had to admit looked pretty pitiful.

He sighed. “Get up.”

Hardison narrowed his eyes. “Why?”

“’Cause you’re gonna go in there and fix this is why.” Eliot offered a hand and Hardison grudgingly let him pull him up off the floor.

“How am I supposed to fix crazy?” Hardison asked, gesturing manically in the direction of the restroom where Parker was holed up.

“I dunno, but you better figure it out. You can’t just leave a woman crying in a bathroom.”

Hardison took a few steps towards the bathroom and then stopped. “But it really freaks me out when women start doing that crying thing. I never know what to do.”

“Nobody does, man.” Eliot prodded him to get him walking again.

“Will you come with me?”

“No.”

Hardison stopped again. “Please?”

Eliot gave him an ungentle shove. “No.”

This time Hardison made it all the way to the door of the restroom before he stopped, staring at the knob like it was radioactive. “Nana told me never ever to go in the ladies room.”

“Are you gonna get in there or do I have to call your nana and tell her you made a girl cry?”

“Naw, man, you wouldn’t do that, would you? That’s uncalled for.”

Eliot jerked his head towards the door. “Then be a man and get in there.”

Hardison reached for the knob and cast a tremulous look at Eliot. “Pray for me.” He tugged open the door and stepped inside. For a moment the sound of Parker’s hitching sobs carried out into the bar, and then the door closed on the two of them.

Eliot shook his head in disgust. “Dumbass.”
 


(P.S. Now there's a sequel: "I and Love and You")

Comments

( 37 comments — Leave a comment )
mystizan
Aug. 12th, 2011 03:45 am (UTC)
WRITE A PART 2! WRITE A PART 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Plllllllllllllllllzzz do a part 2!!! This was so much fun! & just...now I need to know how it gets fixed. Plz? *puppy eyes*
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
LOL! I'm not sure I have an idea for a part two. Maybe if people threw some prompts out one of them would inspire me. :D
mystizan
Aug. 12th, 2011 10:04 pm (UTC)
Ummm I shall try.

1. On the off chance that Alec messes it up, Eliot brings Nana in.

2."What are you doing here, Hardison?" Parker asked, her voice less welcoming than the Butcher of Kiev.

3. Sometimes, a lot of times, falling in love means trusting that the person who says they love you, really, truly does.

idk if any of those will help but I am hopeful for part 2 nonetheless. *sets abt lighting vigil candles*
hannasus
Aug. 16th, 2011 03:03 pm (UTC)
Nice! I'll see what I do. ;)
mystizan
Aug. 16th, 2011 04:58 pm (UTC)
*gets so excited I knock over vigil candle, catching the tablecloth on fire. 0_o grabs extinguisher just in time* I mean yes, well. If u insist...
dameange
Aug. 12th, 2011 04:15 am (UTC)
This? Utter awesomeness of awesomeness!
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
ariestess
Aug. 12th, 2011 05:11 am (UTC)
Wow! This was a fantastic story. You really got Eliot and Hardison both bang on. Particularly Eliot. I got recced this story by darkhawkhealer, and I'm damned glad I did, because this is phenomenal!
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
darkhawkhealer
Aug. 12th, 2011 05:15 am (UTC)
I loved this so much after I read it, that I had to rec it to all and sundry.

Granted, at midnight, 'all and sundry' is only really the two people still awake, but still!

I heart Eliot, and you got him perfectly. Poor Parker! Hardison just needs to give her a hug, and not say anything else. *G*
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:47 pm (UTC)
Wow, thanks so much! I really appreciate the rec!
daria234
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:02 am (UTC)
This was so fun. Aw, poor Hardison. And lol Eliot has no idea what Hardison should do except that he has to do SOMETHING. love it
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And thanks for reading!
fleurlb
Aug. 12th, 2011 07:33 am (UTC)
So perfect, I can see this happening. Really hoping there's a part 2. :)
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I don't really have an idea for a part 2, but maybe if people threw out some prompts one of them will inspire me. :D
takethewaffles
Aug. 12th, 2011 08:42 am (UTC)
aw so cute. protective older brother eliot, and parker D:
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
elebridith
Aug. 12th, 2011 08:57 am (UTC)
Awesome! I love protective Brother Bear!Eliot, and Hardison arguing that his Nana wouldn't want him to go in the ladies' room? Priceless! :-)
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And thanks for reading!
magnolas
Aug. 12th, 2011 09:02 am (UTC)
LOVE THIS! Great job :)
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:51 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
grifter617
Aug. 12th, 2011 12:37 pm (UTC)
OMG this was sooooo cute!!! You really captured Eliot's and Hardison's voices!

I loved it!
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:52 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
austin360
Aug. 12th, 2011 03:21 pm (UTC)
“How am I supposed to fix crazy?”

Oh, if I had a dollar for every time I thought this.

Great fic, love. I really need to get these DVDs.
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks, sweetie! I think TNT shows a lot of mini-marathons so maybe you can catch up that way. It's not like you really have to see the eps in order.
feenie
Aug. 12th, 2011 05:49 pm (UTC)
What a great fic!! And yes it is so them.
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 06:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
death_of_dreams
Aug. 12th, 2011 07:04 pm (UTC)
I love this SO hard, and I'm an E/P girl so that's how awesome this is, because I really love Eliot being overprotective.
hannasus
Aug. 12th, 2011 07:07 pm (UTC)
Awww, thank you! Eliot's so awesome I can't help but love him no matter who he's with.
hollow_echos
Aug. 16th, 2011 06:23 pm (UTC)
I am an Eliot/Parker shipper all the way through. This fic had me squeeing all the way through. I love how protective Eliot was! So perfect :D Thanks for sharing!
hannasus
Aug. 18th, 2011 05:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
mcamy
Aug. 16th, 2011 09:47 pm (UTC)
AHAHAHAHA! Awesome. :D
hannasus
Aug. 18th, 2011 05:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
kiss_me_cassie
Aug. 16th, 2011 11:12 pm (UTC)
EEEEEEE! I love your Eliot. Seriously. He's perfect. And Hardison... heeee! Awesome job, Sus! :)
hannasus
Aug. 18th, 2011 05:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks, darling! :D
denny_dc
Aug. 29th, 2011 11:23 pm (UTC)
loved this.
hannasus
Sep. 2nd, 2011 02:12 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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